Taiga 490: Fix capitalization in Tools > Patron import

[kohadocs.git] / source / tools.rst

diff --git a/source/tools.rst b/source/tools.rst
index e388f74..2ad6c8f 100644 (file)
--- a/source/tools.rst
+++ b/source/tools.rst
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ management systems.
 
 .. _patrons-and-circulation-label:
 
-Patrons and Circulation
+Patrons and circulation
 ------------------------------------------
 
 .. _patron-lists-label:
@@ -77,19 +77,19 @@ useful for tracking summer reading programs, book clubs and other such clubs.
 Creating a new club template
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
-Click on the 'New Club template' button. Here you can add fields that can be 
+Click on the 'New club template' button. Here you can add fields that can be 
 filled out at the time a new club is created based on the template, or a new 
 enrollment is created for a given club based on the template. 
 
 |image1364|
 
-The name is required. This could be something like 'Adult Book Club', 'Children’s
-Book Club' or 'Summer Reading Program'. Remember these templates will be starting
+The name is required. This could be something like 'Adult book club', 'Children’s
+book club' or 'Summer reading program'. Remember these templates will be starting
 point for each club you create.
 
 The description can be any additional information.
 
-Allow Public Enrollment: if this box is checked it will allow patrons to enroll
+Allow public enrollment: if this box is checked it will allow patrons to enroll
 in a club based on this template from the OPAC.
 
 Require valid email address: if this box is checked only patrons 
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ and choosing 'Enrollment' from the 'Actions' button.
 Comments
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
--  *Get there:* More > Tools > Patrons and Circulation > Comments
+-  *Get there:* More > Tools > Patrons and circulation > Comments
 
 All comments added by patrons via the OPAC to bibliographic records
 require moderation by the librarians. If there are comments awaiting
@@ -187,12 +187,12 @@ below the module list:
 
 |image251|
 
-and next to the Comments tool on the Tools Module
+and next to the Comments tool on the Tools page
 
 |image1219|
 
 To moderate comments click on the notification on the main dashboard or
-go directly to the Comments Tool and click 'Approve' or 'Delete' to the
+go directly to the Comments tool and click 'Approve' or 'Delete' to the
 right of the comments awaiting moderation.
 
 |image252|
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ with the exception of a few mandatory ones.
        -  Since values can contain spaces, additional doubled-quotes may
           be required:
 
-          -  "INSTID:12345,BASEBALL:Cubs,""BASEBALL:White Sox"""
+          -  "INSTID:12345,BASEBALL:Cubs,""BASEBALL:White Sox""
 
     **Note**
 
@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ with the exception of a few mandatory ones.
 
 .. _importing-patrons-label:
 
-Importing Patrons
+Importing patrons
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
 Once you have created your file, you can use the patron import tool to
@@ -297,11 +297,11 @@ bring the data into Koha.
 -  Next you can choose default values to apply to all patrons you are
    importing
 
-   -  ex. If you're importing patrons specific to one branch you can use
+   -  For example, if you're importing patrons specific to one branch you can use
       the field on the import form to apply the branch code to all those
       you are importing.
 
--  Finally you need to decide on what data you want to replace if there
+-  Finally, you need to decide on what data you want to replace if there
    are duplicates.
 
    -  A matching record is found using the field you chose for matching
@@ -1682,13 +1682,23 @@ collection, also letting them know where the item needs to be sent.
 Stock Rotation
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-The stock rotation tool allows library staff to create rotation plans and add 
-items to them. A cronjob is then used to cycle these items round the specified 
-libraries on the rotation plan, moving them to the next stage after the 
-prescribed period of time has passed at the current stage. Email notices may be
-used to provide the library branches with a list of items to be put in-transit 
-to the next branch and if an item is found to be on loan at the time that it 
-should be transfered then an alert will be displayed when it is next returned.
+Stock Rotation helps to spread resources more fairly amongst library branches
+and allows patrons to see a wider range of titles.
+
+Items are popular whilst they are new at a particular branch. However, their
+use often tails off over time. This tool empowers librarians to automate the
+movement of items on to another branch before usage declines and thereby
+extends the items useful life.
+
+Library staff create rotation plans and then assign them to items. A cronjob
+is then used to cycle these items round the specified libraries on the
+rotation plan, moving them to the next stage after the prescribed period
+of time has passed at the current stage.
+
+Email notices may be used to provide the library branches with a list of
+items to be put in-transit to the next branch and if an item is found to be
+on loan at the time that it should be transfered then an alert will be
+displayed when it is next returned.
 
 From the stock rotation tool page you can add new rotation plans and see a 
 summary of your currently configured rotation plans. You can then edit plan